I did not finish this one. And it’s the first I’m rating at one star. I read four chapters and decided I couldn’t do it.
My first issue was the first chapter Ms. Jackson didn’t want to use pronouns so I read a lot of Tiffany this and Tiffany that in one paragraph. This let off in the rest of the chapters and could have been forgivable if I had no other glaring issues.
My second issue was the constant repetition. Every third or fourth paragraph repeated something about Tiffany’s worry about the horses, what could this stranger she’s strangely attracted to be up to, and X and Y just happened like I didn’t read it on the last page. It would have been more fitting for me to start this one yesterday because it was very deja vu and hard to read. If the rest of the book continues in this fashion it could easily be reduced to a 100 page story and be a lot easier to read.